Question:
Hey Josh,
I wanted to thank you again for yesterday's presentation - it really
made an impact on my career outlook and you've motivated me to look
beyond the traditional corporate path. I've started looking around
through the websites you mentioned, and I plan on sending out a
request for opportunities as you suggested. I'd like to get your
advice on how to go about this - besides mentioning my studies at
Cornell and my interest in this kind of work, what other information
do you think would most effectively capture peoples' attention without
making the email too lengthy? Should each email be tailored to the
organization (besides the contact name) like in a cover letter? Would
you suggest attaching my resume to the initial email? I want to make
sure it's just right before sending them out, so any advice you might
have would really help.
Answer:
It was awesome being back at CU. Take a look at the email that I
actually sent below. I'm going to be on campus until Nov. 17. Will
you email me again in a week or so when I know my schedule better?
I'd be more than happy to sit down and talk
to you in greater depth. Thanks!
Hi Mr. Evans --
I came across your contact in carbon finance leadership materials
through my work with the UN. I recently led the development of a
landmark environmental initiative at Citigroup, and I am
extraordinarily interested in using my energy and creativity to help
advance your Climate Change Practice.
I'm currently a third-year law student at the University of Michigan.
As a Fulbright Scholar prior to law school, I worked to expand
educational access for young people in Nigeria. I'm presently
advising the African Venture Capital Association on key legal and
regulatory issues related to the development of renewable energy
projects and the sale of carbon credits.
I'm attaching my resume and would be happy to send anything else you
may find useful in evaluating my candidacy for an associate position.
All the best,
